1. Pleasant, clear speaking voice 2. I loved your other interesting facts section. It was interesting to learn that the White House staff loved Mrs. Wilson because of her gentle nature.
Weaknesses
1. Some stuttering 2. You missed quite a bit of information that was required. a. You said nothing about her childhood. b. You did not give the date of her marriage. c. You never mentioned whether she had children or not d. You did not give the dates of the presidency. 3. You stated she graduated from college, but never named the college. 4. You gave a FALSE FACT. You said she died in 1814 but also stated she was born in the 1840’s. 5. Phrases like “Here we go.” and “That’s it.” Should be eliminated 6. Rather short presentation. You need to put more effort into your work.
Daniel - Ellen Wilson
ReplyDeleteStrengths
1. Pleasant, clear speaking voice
2. I loved your other interesting facts section. It was interesting to learn that the White House staff
loved Mrs. Wilson because of her gentle nature.
Weaknesses
1. Some stuttering
2. You missed quite a bit of information that was required.
a. You said nothing about her childhood.
b. You did not give the date of her marriage.
c. You never mentioned whether she had children or not
d. You did not give the dates of the presidency.
3. You stated she graduated from college, but never named the college.
4. You gave a FALSE FACT. You said she died in 1814 but also stated she was born in the 1840’s.
5. Phrases like “Here we go.” and “That’s it.” Should be eliminated
6. Rather short presentation. You need to put more effort into your work.
Overall grade 24/30